I NEED SOME FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!?

The first description is just to much. I this and I that. Tone it down a bit. Other than that, I REALLY WANT TO FINISH READING IT!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!! I'm totally addicted. Please, somehow, even if you have to email me, can i read more? You are on a great roll. Don't stop now. It is really good.